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Sunday, January 14, 2024

Crafting Compelling Mysteries: Set the Scene


I'm sharing in this post primarily how to set the scene in a mystery. It's important to create an atmospheric setting where tension and curiosity thrives, using vivid details like the hushed atmosphere and unspoken gestures. 

Let's take a closer look.

On the quiet G-Street of Philly, a hushed tension stirred as side-glances were shot at Brenda, who couldn't figure out what was going on. As Brenda paced down G-Street, the air thickened with unspoken gestures. Whispers marched through the neighborhood like shadows, and Brenda, puzzled, couldn't shake-off the feeling that something was amiss. Little did she realize, G-Street concealed a mystery waiting to be solved.

Brenda struggled in the unsettling atmosphere, determination pushed her forward.

"I've lived on G-Street all my life." Brenda spoke as she traveled to catch public transportation, to get to her retail store job. "I'm gonna find out what's going on."

Brenda realized that she had to uncover the truth. The twenty-three bus rolling up caught Brenda by surprise. The other passengers shuffling onto the bus snapped her back, made her jump. She boarded too. By the time her stop came, Brenda had devised a plan to solve the mysterious tension. Brenda stopped talking to herself, didn't care about people's stares.

"You alright?" An older lady asked from the seat behind Brenda.

"Yep. Brenda said, as her stop approached.

I've familiarized you with a setting for a scene, and there are a few more steps in writing a page-turning mystery that I'll go through briefly.

It's essential to develop characters with unique abilities and motivations, considering how their personalities swirl into the mystery.

Suspense is paramount but must be strategically placed. Clues are gradually placed while holding back certain information. 

The plot is full of twists and turns, defining how the story unfolds. Of course, the plot answers all questions at the appropriate time. Keep readers guessing.  




 
 

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